Oh, there's just so much to love in here. The drunken conversation could have gone on forever and I wouldn't have minded. Those guys are like sorority sisters, seriously. Holy crap, earlier when Akon was like 'he's good for fucking' I went :0 because I was so terrified that Mayuri was going to skewer him or eat him or turn him into a pinata or something. And when he snuck up on Hisagi? I swear I held my breath because I was afraid he was going to nab him too. Hisagi and Akon have the best BFF relationship...love it.
Anyway, I'm rambling, but hopefully you get the general gist that your writing ROCKS and I can't wait to see where you go next. <3
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Date: 2010-04-14 11:08 pm (UTC)Oh, there's just so much to love in here. The drunken conversation could have gone on forever and I wouldn't have minded. Those guys are like sorority sisters, seriously. Holy crap, earlier when Akon was like 'he's good for fucking' I went :0 because I was so terrified that Mayuri was going to skewer him or eat him or turn him into a pinata or something. And when he snuck up on Hisagi? I swear I held my breath because I was afraid he was going to nab him too. Hisagi and Akon have the best BFF relationship...love it.
Anyway, I'm rambling, but hopefully you get the general gist that your writing ROCKS and I can't wait to see where you go next. <3