2nd person worked really, really well for this! And the part at the end? When Gin stabbed Shuuhei through the shoulder? Really, really sexy. I was so imaging what happened after that.

Truly, I love dark!Shuuhei. How you portrayed him here--how he loathes and yet desperately needs these encounters with Gin--is perfect. The part where Gin was like "What, no kiss?" made me laugh (and imagine Gin's reaction if Shuuhei actually had kissed him at that moment--I think the eyes would have opened wide at that).

Seriously, it was quite, quite nice. I love a somewhat slutty Shuuhei.