ext_42718 ([identity profile] barukode.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] blood_crow 2008-01-22 04:41 am (UTC)


.................. I want to cuddle in bed with multiple boys now.

You have a phenomenal way of delineating things so well; I can see every seemingly simple motion, and it makes the entire scene so much more personal. I feel like I was there- which is also why I WANT to be there. The tone of this was so serene. Even when they talked about boysehks, the underlying mood was the stillness. Makes me fuzzy. I love how much Shuu eats, it is wonderful. All three of them were incredibly in character, and this entire piece was a marvel. *Applauds you*

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