Too much lovely descriptive imagery for me to pick a particular one to gush over. OH MY.
I love that you did this from Akon's point of view. I love reading that way of thinking, and the little telling observations, even at such an age (but it's Akon... which is why it works so damn well) And you kind of smacked my genderbend kink awake with the gigai bit. As well as my love for intimate/hardcore moments on/against clean table-like surfaces. Your take on the pair is beautifully refreshing!
(Have you ever outright written Akon/Mayuri? I keep convincing myself you have but when I look, it slips back into its vault in the alternate universe, I swear)
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Date: 2010-08-27 08:37 am (UTC)I love that you did this from Akon's point of view. I love reading that way of thinking, and the little telling observations, even at such an age (but it's Akon... which is why it works so damn well) And you kind of smacked my genderbend kink awake with the gigai bit. As well as my love for intimate/hardcore moments on/against clean table-like surfaces. Your take on the pair is beautifully refreshing!
(Have you ever outright written Akon/Mayuri? I keep convincing myself you have but when I look, it slips back into its vault in the alternate universe, I swear)