Love the hell out of this pairing! (It's even better that I read this still with Mayuri's song in my head).
The use of the second person is utterly superb. You and one other person I think, have pulled that off beautifully. I am still wary of using it myself.
Mayrui only partially dressed is win, and then Yoruichi stalking over to him like a panther.
The imagery of Mayuri's paint smearing, leaving its traces on her bare skin, and being raked off him under her fingernails, is pure win.
Also going into how his stare is even more intense, especially after that (intentionally I'm guessing based on him) disinterested stare.
Then her being put on and fucked without abandon, what is revealed is an exam table, being reminded they are in a laboratory. <3<3!!! (Serious medical science fetish!)
Lol curious Akon. Bah, nothing wrong with watching (but then again I would be a 12th member over all the others). Love how he is interested in knowing what it is like being a girl. Loled when he asked Urahara for a female gigai.
Also, the hint about her being Urahara's lover and him knowing about it! Perhaps there may be a threesome of them in the future?
Too bad Akon didn't get to see them come, but I can guess it was a good thing Urahara drew him away before Mayuri noticed he was there (though there is always the possibly he wouldn't care, considering he had his door open to begin with).
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The use of the second person is utterly superb. You and one other person I think, have pulled that off beautifully. I am still wary of using it myself.
Mayrui only partially dressed is win, and then Yoruichi stalking over to him like a panther.
The imagery of Mayuri's paint smearing, leaving its traces on her bare skin, and being raked off him under her fingernails, is pure win.
Also going into how his stare is even more intense, especially after that (intentionally I'm guessing based on him) disinterested stare.
Then her being put on and fucked without abandon, what is revealed is an exam table, being reminded they are in a laboratory. <3<3!!! (Serious medical science fetish!)
Lol curious Akon. Bah, nothing wrong with watching (but then again I would be a 12th member over all the others). Love how he is interested in knowing what it is like being a girl. Loled when he asked Urahara for a female gigai.
Also, the hint about her being Urahara's lover and him knowing about it! Perhaps there may be a threesome of them in the future?
Too bad Akon didn't get to see them come, but I can guess it was a good thing Urahara drew him away before Mayuri noticed he was there (though there is always the possibly he wouldn't care, considering he had his door open to begin with).