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Title: Orange and Black [Rub Me to Sleep] 
Pairing: Renji x Ichigo x Shuuhei 
Rating: PG-13 
Warnings: Mild to strong language, sexual innuendos, and yaoi [but like those are warnings, more like BLESSINGS] 
Disclaimer: I do not own Bleach, I only steal its characters so I can go on perverted conquests via fan fics. Also, all characters involved in sexual situations are fictional and above the legal age of consent in the state of California, regardless of what age these characters may be in the material they are derived from. 
Summary: Renji tries a new method to help Ichigo get some sleep. Meanwhile, Shuuhei is gorging himself on post-sex food.

Thanks to [livejournal.com profile] chibicoffee for reading this over.  She seemed to think it was decent enough, so I'm posting it...
 

Lying in the dark of Shuuhei’s bedroom, Ichigo busied himself with staring at the ceiling. The door had been left open, and light from a distant room down the hall provided enough luminosity for him to see the body lying beside him. Glancing down, he let his eyes roam over Renji, who was sprawled on his stomach with his tattooed arms resting on the pillow above his head. Ichigo stared at the other man for a long moment, then reached out so he could trace one of the jagged lines on the redhead’s back.

“Mmm,” Renji hummed, the sound muffled against his pillow. The muscles on his shoulders twitched against the new disturbance, and after a moment he slowly cracked his eyes open. “You still awake?” he asked, his voice hoarse with sleep.

“No, I sleep with my eyes open,” Ichigo replied, a small smile on his face as he rolled his eyes. “Of course I am, genius.”

The redhead scowled, then slowly pushed himself up so he was resting on his elbows. He gave a flick of his head in a vain attempt to throw his hair back, but long strands fell over his shoulders and into his face anyway. “Don’t be a smartass, I’m too tired to deal with it.”

“Then don’t ask dumb as fuck questions,” the younger man countered, his smile turning into more of a smirk. He watched as Renji’s eyes lit up, the man’s auburn gaze flashing with anger. He stared back unflinchingly, until his eyes were drawn to the fiery strands cascading over Renji’s shoulder. His smirk fell and he reached forward, fisting a handful of silky hair to rub between his fingers.

“I like your hair.”

“Like I haven’t heard that before.”

“I was trying to compliment you, asshole!”

Renji just chuckled, the heat in his eyes dissipating. He ran a hand over his face, rubbing roughly, and then let it fall as he looked past Ichigo. “Where’s Shuuhei?”

“In the kitchen.”

“Wh--he’s eating again?”

“Yea, he’s been in there for about twenty minutes now.”

Shaking his head Renji turned over on his back, then sat up completely to lean against the wall beside Ichigo. The sheet fell down as he moved, pooling around their waists and obscuring their lower halves from view.

“The same old shit?”

“Huh?” Ichigo grunted, glancing at the redhead from beneath furrowed brows.

“Did you have a nightmare?” Renji asked instead.

“Oh. Yea.”

“That's it?”

“ ‘That's it’ what?”

“What’d you dream about?”

“It’s none of your business!”

“It is when you wake me up 'cause of it! C’mon, tell me.”

“No,” Ichigo snorted, crossing his arms defiantly. He glared at Renji pointedly, then shifted so he could lay on his stomach. After fluffing his pillow he dropped his head, turning away from the other man and closing his eyes. He’d only been laying there for a few seconds when he felt a sudden weight on top of him, causing his eyes to snap open once more.

“The fuck?!”

Craning his head around Ichigo stared back at Renji, the man’s naked ass resting against the small of his back. He glared at the tattooed face, which was smirking down at him behind a heavy curtain of crimson.

“Get off, I’m not going again,” Ichigo hissed, trying to sit up,

“Shuddup,” Renji replied, placing his hands on the younger man’s shoulders and pushing down. “It isn’t like that, I don’t wanna fuck you right now.”

“Then why the hell are you sitting on me?”

“I wanna try something, see if it helps ya sleep.”

Ichigo scowled suspiciously, but decided not to move. He allowed his body to go limp against the mattress, waiting for Renji do whatever this ‘something’ was. After a moment he felt rough, sword-calloused hands running over his sides, making his heart jump. He remained completely still as those hard hands rose higher, coming to rest on his shoulders. For a moment they remained still, before beginning a rhythmic flexing of the fingers. Ichigo’s brows furrowed, and then he was smirking, turning his head to look at Renji.

“You’re giving me a massage?” he asked, unable to hide the amused disbelief in his voice.

“Shuddup, it’s relaxing,” the redhead retorted, a small glare on his face. “An' it feels good, too.”

Relenting, Ichigo just shrugged his shoulders, folding his arms over his pillow and resting his cheek against the top of his hands. He concentrated on the rough fingers kneading his taut muscles, noting how they were surprisingly gentle, but still strong. A soft sound left his mouth, and his eyelashes fluttered before he realized what Renji had said.

“Wait,” the younger man muttered, turning his head again to glance at Renji. “How the hell would you know if it feels good?”

“ 'Cause I’ve had back rubs before.”

“Who the hell gave you a back rub?”

The vice-captain didn’t respond right away. His gaze fell away from Ichigo’s face, redirecting to his hands as they worked. A small frown settled on his features, and Ichigo suddenly wished for his words back.

“Rukia used to give me back rubs when we were kids in Rukongai.”

“Oh,” Ichigo muttered lamely. He couldn’t think of anything else to say, and so he just kept his mouth shut and turned his eyes towards the wall. Renji’s hands continued to rub over his shoulders, slowly making their way down to his middle back. The redhead would pause every now and then to scrap his blunt nails over pale skin, sending pleasant shivers up Ichigo’s spine.

The longer Renji’s strong hands roamed over Ichigo the drowsier he became. Silence had fallen over them, and all he could hear was his own breathing muffled against the pillow. A string of contented sighs left his mouth, mere whispers of his pleasure and gratitude towards the vice-captain. Soon his eyelids were sagging, and when he couldn’t hold them up any longer he let them fall shut completely, succumbing to the blackness washing over him.

Tilting his head, Renji tried to catch a better glimpse of Ichigo’s face. The kid’s eyes were closed, and the sound of his breathing had slowed to the rhythmic hum of sleep. With a small smile he ceased rubbing the other man’s back, letting his palm lay flat against soft skin.

“You guys starting without me?”

Renji turned his head at the new voice, his gaze falling on a naked Shuuhei standing in the doorway. When the dark-haired lieutenant opened his mouth once more Renji shook his head, wordlessly indicating that they had to keep it down. Shuuhei’s brows furrowed in clear confusion, but he remained silent as he crept towards the futon, his dark gaze falling to Ichigo as he drew closer.

“He fell asleep?” the shinigami asked quietly, crawling onto the bed so he could lay sideways beside Ichigo. Renji gave a small nod for confirmation before slipping off the other man. He slid down on the other side of Ichigo, turning to lay on his back.

“What did you do for him?”

“Gave him a back rub.”

When Shuuhei didn’t answer right away Renji turned his head. The older man was staring at him with a small smirk, amusement clear in his dark eyes as he snickered.

“I didn’t know you gave back rubs, Abarai.”

“You kiddin’ me?” the redhead questioned, grinning smugly. He held his hands up and flexed his fingers repeatedly. “These hands work fuckin' wonders.”

“Don’t I know it,” Shuuhei replied. He rolled onto his stomach and stretched, his hips dipping towards the mattress, rubbing against the sheets suggestively. Renji’s eyes roamed over the ninth division’s sleek body, its slim but strong exterior reminding him of some kind of wild cat. His gaze was inevitably drawn to Shuuhei’s ass, which was pale and tone, practically begging to be underneath him.

“Not yet, Renji.”

“C’mon,” Renji coaxed huskily, starting to turn on his side and towards the older man. He stopped when a large hand suddenly slapped over his chest, before drifting upwards to curl around his neck. Glancing down he looked at Ichigo, who was still sound asleep. He fell back against the pillow as the younger shinigami leaned into him, the kid’s orange head coming to nuzzle against his chest.

Smiling softly, Renji wrapped an arm around Ichigo to pull the man closer. He ran his hand up a smooth back, pausing to scratch at the orange nape soothingly.

“If he doesn’t wake up, then you’re giving him back rubs every night.”

The redhead looked up when Shuuhei spoke. The vice-captain had his head resting on his crossed forearms, his dark eyes watching Ichigo calmly.

“Why?” Renji asked softly.

“Because, it’ll mean that it helped him sleep.”

There was a heaviness in the other man’s words, and Renji gave a small nod. He let a moment of silence pass between them, concentrating on the feel of Ichigo’s slow heartbeat against his ribs.

“Y'know what this means,” he finally muttered, a smug grin creeping over his features, his right hand gesturing to Ichigo lying against him as his left ran up to tangle in soft orange locks.

“Yea, yea. You’re topping him tomorrow.”

“Don’t sound so disappointed.”

“Who said I was? That means I get your ass instead.”

Shuuhei smiled, then turned to lie on his back. He crossed his hands behind his head, staring at the ceiling in apparent thought.

“You’ll be on your hands and knees, Renji. That way I can see the tattoos on your back as I fuck you from behind.”

Renji felt heat wash over him, blood pooling to his stomach. It didn’t help when the other man’s gaze turned towards him, eyes like twin pools of black smoldering behind a curtain of lashes. Shuuhei smiled slow and seductive, and Renji licked his lower lip.

“Shit…”

Shuuhei chuckled.  

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Date: 2008-01-22 04:28 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] tangerine-haze.livejournal.com
Gah! Loves! *hugs*

SxIxR.... My favorite boys. Even without the smex they're so hot! You kept Ichi angsty, Renji nurturing and Shuu sexy and mysterious!

fyi: Your title info is at the bottom of the fic not the top like usual. Don't think it makes a difference though.

Your mood.... depressed? *more hugs*

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Date: 2008-01-22 04:37 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] blood-crow.livejournal.com
OH YAY!!! Exactly what I wanted to portray with all three of them xD *flails* Shuu is becoming a fast favorite of mine *swoons*

Oh! And thank you for telling me that my title's all messed up...I think it should be fixed now though ^^

*hugs back* It's been a slow day, but your comment made me smile :D

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Date: 2008-01-22 04:41 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] barukode.livejournal.com

.................. I want to cuddle in bed with multiple boys now.

You have a phenomenal way of delineating things so well; I can see every seemingly simple motion, and it makes the entire scene so much more personal. I feel like I was there- which is also why I WANT to be there. The tone of this was so serene. Even when they talked about boysehks, the underlying mood was the stillness. Makes me fuzzy. I love how much Shuu eats, it is wonderful. All three of them were incredibly in character, and this entire piece was a marvel. *Applauds you*

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Date: 2008-01-22 04:47 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] blood-crow.livejournal.com
AWWWWWW!!! That's such an amazing comment, I'm not even sure what to say! And believe me, I want to be there too... That you say all three of them were in character is a HUGE compliment. I find it kind of hard to balance a group of characters together, but these three just flow together seemlessly (sp?)

This is actually going to be a running series of just random events that sometimes flow together! I have two so far that I've posted, and now I shall be working on a third

*hugs you*

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Date: 2008-01-22 04:56 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] chibicoffee.livejournal.com
*FLAILS* you already know how much i LOVE this but i'll tell you again.

I LOOOOVVVEEEEEE THISSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS

xDDDD

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Date: 2008-01-22 05:38 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] blood-crow.livejournal.com
YESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS

^^

And I love you for reading it for me!!!

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Date: 2008-01-22 06:46 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] letmyself-go.livejournal.com
This leaves me all fuzzy in the inside.
Absolutly adorable fic! And Ichigo here *LOVES* just overloading cuteness!

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Date: 2008-01-22 06:19 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] blood-crow.livejournal.com
Awww thank you so much! Ichigo is definitely my favorite boy (he speaks to me the most of the muses xP) so I'm glad you liked him! *hugs*

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Date: 2008-01-22 06:48 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] gwy.livejournal.com
omg never read renji and ichigo with shuuhei (more of a renji/ichigo fangirl, but shuuhei is hot so its okay *nods*), this was really wonderfully written! And sexy.

You... dont plan a next part with the actually sexy dont you? *g* *blush*

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Date: 2008-01-22 06:22 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] blood-crow.livejournal.com
I know! I've only come across these three one other time, and that was at cykotkys_fics! (you should read it)

And I do plan on writing the smexing scene xD I've already one for these three (shameless self-pimping). Your icon is also amazing

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Date: 2008-01-22 06:56 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] day-eight.livejournal.com
Aww. I'm really glad I had time to read this before I headed off to bed. It's really a lovely thing to go to sleep on! This threesome has got to be one of the hottest in the Bleach fandom. ^.^

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Date: 2008-01-22 10:32 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] blood-crow.livejournal.com
Awwwwwwwww you left me a comment!! I've missed your comments ^^ And I'm also glad that you liked this! It's definitely become my favorite threesome in Bleach fandom xDD *hugs*

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Date: 2008-01-22 09:21 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] shiawase-ai.livejournal.com
ANOTHER ORANGE AND BLACK ONE!!! Sorry I wasn't able to see it earlier. School sucks.

Anyways.... I totally fell in love with this threesome. Srsly. BECAUSE OF YOU!!! YAAAAAAAAY. You made me a convert. Now I'm starting to think Renji/Ichigo is sexy too. But Of course, as long as Shuuhei's there too. ;p

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Date: 2008-01-22 10:37 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] blood-crow.livejournal.com
LOL!! One of these days, you are going to love Renji/Ichigo!!! I won't die until I convert you completely! But of course Shuuhei makes ANYTHING better ^^ *loves you*

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Date: 2008-01-22 12:13 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] gimmilemon.livejournal.com
Awwwww... this was sooo, well waffy's not the word but that's the only one I can think of right now... It made my head waffy at least XD

I love your writing!

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Date: 2008-01-22 10:38 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] blood-crow.livejournal.com
LMAO! waffy?! I'll take that as a compliment xDDD And thank you so much!!

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Date: 2008-01-22 12:44 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] cmc42.livejournal.com
Great, just all the imagery and Renji giving Ichigo a backrub was so lovely. Love this ^_^

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Date: 2008-01-22 10:43 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] blood-crow.livejournal.com
Awwwwwww I know!! I love it when the boys show their softer sides xD *hugs you*

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Date: 2008-01-22 12:47 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] fierydragonsky.livejournal.com
Oooh, this is a series you say? I must have missed the earlier ones. Glee! *goes back and reads the older parts of the series*

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Date: 2008-01-22 10:46 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] blood-crow.livejournal.com
Yes I do say! And I've only written one before this, which is called "Never Better" (you can find that on my index page). That one has a totally different mood xD

And I love your icon O_O

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Date: 2008-01-22 01:41 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] nightswhisper.livejournal.com
XDD Oh dear. Backrubs. The ultimate mix of heaven and hell... wonderful and evil..who ever said I was complaining about evil?

Lovely lil fic!

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Date: 2008-01-22 10:49 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] blood-crow.livejournal.com
Mmmmmmmmm backrubs...I prefer backscratches, but Ichigo likes the rub xDDD Thank you for reading and liking!!

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Date: 2008-01-22 08:27 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] stark-black.livejournal.com
Oh GAWD!! Shuuhei is so perfect! He's all yeah we're doing it this way cause I say so. *sexy look* *Renji dies*

SHUU YOU DA MAN!!

I also like how caring Renji is. He's no the woman when Shuu is involved. But it's a good thing.

*cries* Ichigo! Poor baby!! Good dialogue between him and Renji BTW.

*hugs you*

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Date: 2008-01-22 10:59 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] blood-crow.livejournal.com
LMAO I KNOW!! Dude, the more I write Shuuhei the more badass seme he becomes. The guy is hardcore in this fic, and I love how he speaks to me. (and BAHAHA to your *Renji dies*).

But thanks! The dialogue took me the longest, but I'm happy with how it came out! I need to keep up the bickering with Renji and Ichigo, they're the poster disfunctional couple. And Renji seems like he WOULD be caring (just look at his relationship with Rukia!) And people wonder why I love him *sighs*

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Date: 2008-01-22 08:32 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] annieroo2.livejournal.com
I loved your first Orange and Black because it was so unbelievably hot. I loved this one because it stirred such strong emotions but still managed to feel so sweet. With just a few lines it was apparent that Renji and Shuuhei love Ichigo but also feel very protective of him as well. If you're continuing this series will you ever reveal why Ichigo is so broken?

I adored how they decide who tops whom. It really made me laugh. I think I've said this before but you inject humor in just the right places to make your fics more fun. :)

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Date: 2008-01-22 11:19 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] blood-crow.livejournal.com
Awwwwwwwww what a fantastic review!! Shuuhei and Renji do care for Ichigo deeply and feel the need to protect him. And I will be continuing the series, most definitely. I don't know many fics there will be, though xD Alot more concerning Ichigo will be revealed in the near future!!

And LMAO! I thought that was funny too xD Whoever he falls asleep on gets to top him next time. I also like to throw in humor wherever I can without it being out of place, just because it lightens the mood xD

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Date: 2008-01-22 09:25 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] calmingeffects.livejournal.com
Wow I loved this! it felt so intimate and welcoming and sexy thanks so much for sharing
Edited Date: 2008-01-22 09:26 pm (UTC)

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Date: 2008-01-22 11:21 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] blood-crow.livejournal.com
Awww thank you!! That's definitely what I wanted to convey considering Never Better was so intense. I shot towards a calmer mood that was warm and inviting ^^ And you are welcome! I love to share! *loves you*

Your icon is gold *drools*

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Date: 2008-01-22 09:38 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] ratherbe4gotten.livejournal.com
This was so sweet! Pretty much all the threesomes I've seen have been all about the smut, this was a nice change XDD

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Date: 2008-01-22 11:26 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] blood-crow.livejournal.com
Awww a comment from Jo!! Yea threesomes usually are about the smut, and the first one I did with these three was all about the smut too. But here I just wanted to portray a softer side to their relationship, something that showed the care they have for eachother so it's not seen as just sex. And wow that was a long response...Lmao I'm glad you liked it though! It's good to hear from you again ;)

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Date: 2008-01-23 01:19 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] aurorarose1414.livejournal.com
cmc42 told me at work that you had posted a Ren/Ichi/Shuu piece and I have been waiting ALL day to get home to read it. It was totally worth the wait!!!!! So adorable and hot and cute all at the same time! *sigh* The fact that you're making this a series is like a dream come true...this threesome needs more fics written about them. Gah, they're all so hot.

On a more serious note, this was really well written. I've been reading a lot of your stories lately and I have to say that you real drop the reader into the scene so they feel like they are *right there* experiencing it along with the characters. I swear, it Tite Kubo was a fan girl he would write like this! hehehehe. *hugs*

p.s. I love how you explained that the yaoi "warnings" were actually blessings in the begining. Hehehe

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Date: 2008-01-23 03:44 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] blood-crow.livejournal.com
LMAO but it's true isn't it?! I was thinking about it when I put my warnings up, and I was like "Dude, why is yaoi considered a WARNING?!?!" xDDD And oh thank you so much for the glowing review *sways* I always appreciate the kind comments you drop on my story pages! I definitely do try and write so people feel as if they're a part of the story, it adds more intimacy.

And I agree with you, this threesome deserves more love. I've seen a lot of Bya/Ren/Ichi, but I prefer Shuu to Bya ;D

Oh, between you and me, I AM Kubo Tite. xDD

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Date: 2008-01-23 07:27 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] haru-42.livejournal.com
*pant* *pant*.....OMG!!! The hotness kills me! That was so good! I really liked the mix of tenderness for Ichigo and the sexy. Plus you did a really good job on Shuuhei, his 20 minute eating binge was cute. Great job! Moar nao!

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Date: 2008-01-23 10:36 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] blood-crow.livejournal.com
LOL!! There wasn't even any sex in this one and everyone is talking about the hawtness! It amuses me muchly! And thank you for liking Shuuhei!! Stark's fic implanted the shoomoo bug, and now I can't get the guy outta my head (not that I'm complaining xD).

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Date: 2008-01-25 09:22 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] liralen.livejournal.com
I really enjoyed that. Thanks for writing it. I loved the flow of it and the detailing of Renji's hands. Ichigo touching the tattoos at the first sent shivers up my spine. Nicely done.

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Date: 2008-01-25 10:27 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] blood-crow.livejournal.com
Oh thank you *beams* I love inducing shivers onto unsuspecting readers!!! And Renji does have some talented hands ;)

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Date: 2008-08-07 08:47 am (UTC)
From: (Anonymous)
AAAWWWWWWW!!!!!!!!!!
so cute^^

But why the hell that scene:
“Where’s Shuuhei?”

“In the kitchen.”

“Wh--he’s eating again?”

“Yea, he’s been in there for about twenty minutes now.”
I loved it, it is very kawaii, but what is he eating and why "again"???
please tell me (if you are able to) at http://acaedes.deviantart.com/
(I dont have a livejournal account)
or just write a new story *ginichimarugrin*

need help!!!

Date: 2009-01-01 09:14 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mayoranime.livejournal.com
So q': how do i become a beta for someone...??? i'm just asking because ya said someone reproof ur story, which by the way i loved,e ven though is pg:13...anyways, keep it up n let me know if u know how or if someone needs a beta (I would prefer to be a yaoi beta, but i'll take almost anything)... just want to help out and I love reading....

Re: need help!!!

Date: 2009-01-01 09:44 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] blood-crow.livejournal.com
HMMM well it's not really an official thing...Usually you just get to know a writer on a personal level (basically become their friend) and if they're looking for someone to edit for them, you just offer and hope they agree! I never really had an official 'beta' myself, but my friend chibicoffee would check my stories every now and then when I'd ask her too. But I'm glad you liked the story!

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Date: 2010-02-25 03:22 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] spikykun.livejournal.com
KJLGDSAGSDF IMPOSSIBLY CUTE. The RenIchi in me (so, all of me :P) is purring with delight. Seriously, and I think I've already read this one sometime in 2008 or something. Fuck, this: He stared back unflinchingly, until his eyes were drawn to the fiery strands cascading over Renji’s shoulder. His smirk fell and he reached forward, fisting a handful of silky hair to rub between his fingers.

“I like your hair.”

“Like I haven’t heard that before.”

I love your Renji. The interaction between him and Ichigo, and then with Shuuhei, it's so distinct and awesome, you can really see their characters shining through.
Oooh, and this!
“C’mon,” Renji murmured huskily, starting to turn on his side and towards the older man. He stopped when a large hand suddenly slapped over his chest, before drifting upwards to curl around his neck. Glancing down he looked at Ichigo, who was still sound asleep. He fell back against the pillow as the younger shinigami leaned into him, the kid’s orange head coming to nuzzle against his chest.

Smiling softly, Renji wrapped an arm around Ichigo to pull the man closer. He ran his hand up a smooth back, pausing to scratch at the orange nape soothingly.

It hit me like BANG BITCH because. *wibbles* They are so adorable but in that manly way you've presented them in this fic and the previous one I've read (the one with the smut :P).

I'll finish with this, because, come on, you know you killed me dead with it.
“Yanno what this means,” he finally muttered, a smug grin creeping over his features, his right hand gesturing to Ichigo lying against him as his left ran up to tangle in soft orange locks.

“Yea yea, you’re topping him tomorrow.”

“Don’t sound so disappointed.”

“Who said I was? That just means I get your ass instead.”

*killed dead*

SO ANYWAY YAY! I'M SO GLAD I HAVE FOUND YOU! :DDD

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Date: 2010-02-25 04:30 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] blood-crow.livejournal.com
If I only I still wrote RenIchi, I'd love to pleasure ya with more RenIchi goodness DDDD: Oh, but I'm glad you like my Ren!! I've never been that confident with my portrayal of him so I'm like YESSSSS and feel all accomplished now.

I DO LIKE TO KEEP MY MEN AT LEAST SOMEWHAT MANLY, EVEN WHEN THEY'RE CUDDLING LIKE A BUNCH OF GIRLS XD

Drat, that last interaction with Shuuhei and Renji. I remember when I wanted to write them fucking like animals in the next 'oneshot'. *bows head in self-induced woe*

I'M GLAD YOU FOUND ME TOO. AND I'M GLAD YOU HAVE NOT BE DISAPPOINTED

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